Tuesday, June 9, 2009

9 comments:

Jenny said...

I really enjoyed watching your video. You speak very clearly so it made it very easy to understand. I especially enjoyed that you put your students in it! They were so cute and were doing exactly what they were supposed to! Are you supposed to credit them sometime in the credits? You should look into that to make sure. Otherwise that's it! Loved it!

ninarosa81 said...

I loved your video!! I think it had the perfect amount of visual aids and your voice was clear. It looked like a professional phonics video!!

Doug M. said...

This video was great. I love some of the transitions you used with iMovie. I thought that it was great how you showed footage of your students as well. The interaction part was my favorite. You are very attractive.

Joseph Coleman said...

i'm really struggling to find something to improve about the film. it was great!

the only thing i could really think of is the background when you're in the film. you look like you're in your kitchen correct? and there's a little ringing in the background so i guess just look for a better setting with better acoustics.

Lauren said...

This was great! You did a great job speaking, and I loved the transitions with a movie reel. It was good that you included real students, and practice time at the end for the viewer. My only suggestion would be that there was a little R when you were typing the letters in the beginnng. I'm not sure if that could even be deleted. Otherwise it was wonderful!

Matt Maloney said...

Hello Rachel, liked the video. Enjoyed that it was not really long you were able to say what you needed to say and show in a good amount of time. You were also able to keep the attention of your audience by mixing up the ways you are comming across to your viewer. I think that you could maybe change you appoach when it's you and the camera. You could think about presenting while walking (if you can get another camera person). One other thing I enjoyed the part you added for the viewer to try the sounds as well. Really a solid video. Great Job!

Jess O said...

Great job!!! I might be repaeating what others have said but here are my observations. great music it's fun, the only thing I can think of is instead of your kitchen as a background maybe you can have your classroom or blackboard as a background, I really like the you try it part!!!! Credit your students and yourself and the music!!

Nicole said...

I really liked ths video a lot. I love how you taught a lesson and also showed how students interact when using the strategies to learn phonics rules. How do you get the film strip effect in your video? I really like that. Nice job!

Crandall's Creation said...

Your video was very thorough. I like how you had instruction, repetition, and images. Your audio was clear and pleasant. Nice work!